Thursday, August 1, 2013

Gabriella's creative writing

Title: Enemyfriends.

"The winner is.... Emily!" the principal announced.
"Damn,Damn,Damn!" summer murmured. Summer and Emily are rivals but they are good friends. However, in every competition, Emily won. The day of the last competition of semester, as usual Emily won the first place and Summer won the second place. At the same time, wicked witch, Sophia and wicked sorcerer, Nathan, was looking at Emily and Summer. Summer and Emily were good friends but, Summer and Emily were good friends but, Summer thought he was better than Emily. So, they always fought because even though Emily was right, Summer fought against that. Summer and Emily fought again but they didn't had chance to be friendly again because they had winter vacation. Also, they didn't contact each others because they fought with each other and it was kind of unnatural to talk first. The times went and the school began again. After a few days, they heard the wicked witch, Sophia and the wicked sorcerer, Nathan attacked their village. Emily and Summer was elected to use their Brains to make inventions they can protect village from Nathan and Sophia. 

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1 comment:

  1. I like your story. It's very interesting!

    However, It would be helpful to the reader if you added some pictures to your story.

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